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Naive

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When I’ve got the idea of this photo I wrote this poem (I am not pretending to be a poet):

naive

how could I be
so naive
to think
that I can fly
my dreams
heart
weak hearts
they push me
to the ground
blood flows
from my nose
and dirties
their reality


The moth is the symbol of other people, not this pretty shoes :)
Please tell me what you think about this work. Do you think it is interesting or it is better for me to submit portraits only?

The moth is from kayne-stock
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jasnac's avatar
Perfect photo :) I feel like the moth at the moment....i always hated that trying to be a good person and treating others like that makes me a naive loser and you really captured that feeling in your photo! I like the poem too. Really strong both of them :)